Athena

[Flame]

let's get ourselves started ;;
;; PERHAPS SOME BASICS
name ;; Athena
age ;; 10
gender ;; Mare
alliance ;; Light
position ;; Average

now that that's squared away ;;
;; LET'S GET MORE COMPLICATED
appearance ;; She pitch black, with no markings. She has a dished face, and arched tail. She had green eyes, that always are full of emotion. She steps lightly, and has a slight limp. She walks like a queen, and is small. Only 14.3 hh, she still manages to look bigger. She is quick on her feet, and her body is unmarred. She is sliky and always relaxed. Her body is built for speed, and she is sure footed. Her main and tail are long a silky, and she often hides her face under her long fetlock. The mane and tail do not drag on the ground though.
personality ;; Athena is a sweet mare, who is always willing to help anyone. She doesn’t like to be told what to do, and even if she has never lead a herd, she tends to be a little bossy. She doesn’t give in to well, and loves to play tricks on people. She’s an amazing actress and can play the dark, just as well as be a light. She’s truly a light, but be careful she may be playing around. She’s been a spy before and can do that as well. She’s a fighter, even if she doesn’t look like one, and often uses that misconception as often as possible.


if you're trying for this ;;
;; YOU'LL HAVE TO DO MORE
sample post ;; The black mare trotted forward over the landscape, her dark body hiding in the night. Her green eyes flashing with danger. Oh she was here for more then pleasure. This was a job her king had asked of her. As a maiden of the light, she did was she was asked. But if you looked at the black lady you would see the beautiful dark that she was acting. Suddnely she saw her pray. A high lord, who wanted to ‘talk’ with her. She glided forward to speak with him.

You asked for me my lord?

The stallion eyed her with amusment, before reaching over and nuzzling her. She froze surprised. This is what he wanted? To breed her? Crap! She snorted slightly, and stepped back. He laughed.

”Oh no love… Your not going any where… I want you and I want you now.”

With that he was on her……. When he was done he dismounted, and smiled darkly. He had had fun, and didn’t care about Athena, who snorted and turned away, face angry, and hurt. She could feel pain, and wanted to cry, but kept it down.

”have fun? No? Good. When your done healing return… We’ll see about what else you can do for me.”

With that he was gone, and she was alone. She sank to her belly and cryed with the pain.


now for a little peek ;;
;; WHO'S BEHIND THE MASK
name ;; Flame
other characters ;; Eros, Kairia
predicted activity ;; Every day
comments ;; Love the site… And Athena is going to be fun.

[Flame]

FINISHED

[Phoenix]

Accepted.
She has not been gifted with powers, and so follows Cryos.

And, for reference, you didn't need a sample post, seeing as she's just the average mare and not a lead, imperial or queen.