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Raisa
Feb 13, 2010 14:48:41 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Feb 13, 2010 14:48:41 GMT -5
Not Accepted Well, for one thing -- There aren't lead positions left, only queen, unless you want her to be Touma's lead? Which I would totally go for, just don't expect him to think much of her at first xD And, even then, there is a small extra part in the lead form -- A sample post section at a minimum of 200 words. Other than that, it's fine though.
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raine
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Raisa
Feb 20, 2010 16:56:10 GMT -5
Post by raine on Feb 20, 2010 16:56:10 GMT -5
*that’s cool, she’s down to play with Touma. Lol* Basics: Name- Raisa Age- 3 3/8 gender - mare alliance - dark position- lead
Appearance: Raisa is a dark gray mare standing about 15.3 hands high. She has a mixed tail, though her mane is basically all dark. Her body is completely dark gray, with the only light gray being on her face. In the dark she’s quite confusing because of her dark coloring she’s basically invisible; the only thing you’ll see is her light head coming towards you. Instead of the typical chocolaty color of eye that most horses have, her eyes are darker; almost black. She is a long legged, lean mare. Those long legs make her quick on her feet and make excellent weapons as well. She has a slightly dished head and curved ears like an Arabian that taper down to a delicate muzzle. But don’t be fooled, she’s no sweetie. That muzzle turn and nip you faster than you could ever imagine. personality: Raisa is a difficult mare to get a handle on. She can be sweet when she wants to be, but be careful, she is very deceitful. You have to be careful because you never know when she’s been real or not. She’s a relatively aloof mare, but she does have a temper. An explosive one in fact. She can only be goaded for so long, but when she gets angry someone usually gets hurt. So be careful when dealing with her. But all in all, she’s a loyal mare who knows what she wants and is determined to get it. She also has a very dominant personality and doesn’t tolerate insubordinance at all.
now for a little peek ;; Behind the mask - Raine You can call me Raine, Kini, but I will be most likely to answer to Kini or Raine. other characters: I'm gonna start out with one for now, but I won't lie, I've already begun plotting what my next one is gonna be like. predicted activity: I'm honestly going to try to stay active and check these each day so I should reply to posts pretty quick. comments: (not sure if this is for random comments from me or not, but anyway) I'm a pretty easy person toget along with, if you wanna chat or get to know me message me. That's all it takes.
Sample Post Raise snorted as the steely gray mare came towards her. She pawed the ground with a foreleg and tossed her head with teeth bared warningly. But still the mare came. When the mare was within 10 feet of her, Raisa charged; sinking back on her hind legs to give herself a more forceful takeoff, she lunged at the mare. The other mare squealed and reared, but Raisa struck her on the neck and nipped her hindquarters. As the other mare wheeled around to kick, Raisa swiftly darted away and turned; slamming chest first into the mare’s ribs. The other mare squealed in pain and began to run. But Raisa was not having it. This mare had come to her even after Raisa had warned her. Raisa raced after the other mare; matching her easily stride for stride. But it wasn’t enough just to drive this mare away. No, Raisa would make sure she never again repeated the mistake. Raisa raked the mare’s hindquarters, neck, anything she could get a hold of. The mare attempted to wheel away, but Raisa was simply more nimble. After a while though, Raisa tired of this and allowed the intruder to leave. But not running. No, Raisa’s siege on the mare had done damage. Now the mare could only trot painfully away. Raisa stood observing her for a moment longer, then turned and kicking up her heels, raced off to find some new victim to play her games with.
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Raisa
Feb 20, 2010 17:04:06 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Feb 20, 2010 17:04:06 GMT -5
Accepted She has not been gifted with a power, and therefore follows Thorn.
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